Wednesday, September 24, 2008

SAVE ME

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11 eyebrows raised:

I am said...

shittttttt...rony this is phata-phati !!

I just loved it, just excellent lets see what the pro. have to say..

Ronodip Kar said...

its arpitas hand..the gap amidst the bricks caught my eye and i cudnt afford to miss takin a shot...but i wish her head had not been visible...

~ ॐ ~ said...

Good conceptual work !!! I personally feel that it could have been much better given the situation...


Can I be honest?

Ok... let me be honest !!!

1. you cannot be saving someone who already ha her head almost at the level of the hands... the desperation of a situation does not show! I just realised that you have noticed that too... great !!! so next time you know what not to do..

2. the trees in the background are not helping the picture... the hole in the wall should have had only one thing to look at and not multiple things..

3. I would have zoomed out a bit and let the brick wall show.. it would have made a very nice natural frame around the hole and fingers...

Apologies if these points do not make sense to you... but this is my opinion !!! I do such mistakes all the time, and realise that the picture could have been better !!!

Take Arpita there again and take a picture :)

Ronodip Kar said...

yeah exactly!!!as i put it before the pic could have been much beter!!!!..the trees in the background n her head are a kind of distraction..and i dint edit the pic much!!...am sumhow not satisfied with the picture.and u need not b apologetic om bhaiyya.crticism is really important to improve in life...:)

~ ॐ ~ said...

Like I have said before !
The first and most of the time only person that matters is you as a photographer !!!

rest is upto you to take or accept or reject !

Do click this one again !

Tripti said...

Dude you are ubartha sitara *********** awesome snaps. My funda of photography is that its your perception, and if you like it then thats the best :) . But lovely shot !!!!

Ronodip Kar said...

om-i wil do that...
hey tripti didi thanks so much.....ubharta sitaara...haha...yeaah..as aamir khan had said..evry child is special..lol..taaren zameen par:)

rottenmind said...

gr8 comments.. i wish i got similar comments on mah pics in mah blog... neve.. u no wots mah comment on dis pic well.. so i need not repeat it agen rony... thou... im happy mere haat tere kuch kaam aa sake..lols.. keep it up ;)

Ronodip Kar said...

yeah arpi..but dont wory am gonna take another one of this..but i think the third fllor construction has been complete by now!

Ress said...

the shot is really a great one.!But yes, there is scope of improvement.!
=P...the camera cud have been at a higher level, and um..yes as Om said.!
a lil zooming out would have deff helped.!
but still its an awesome shot.!

the feeling to burst out is clear.!=D
if ..
i say from my perspective.!
its really nice.!
sorta desperation to come out can be seen.!

RAWNIE said...

thanks for dropping by ress...will keep your sugestions in mind and wil b back wih a betr one!